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All stays in you hand update 2 by =ArwenGernak:iconArwenGernak:

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~mirameli Oct 22, 2009, 1:07:27 PM
Salut,

Comment-vas tu ma belle? Bon quant a commenter les deux autres, allons pour celle-ci aussi.

Pour commencer, je l'aime moins que la deuxième. Tu as essayer de mettre une lueur dans le chalet, ce qui anlaidit toute l'affaire. Même problème avec la fille elle est trop grande. C'est comme si tu avait essayer de mincir le chalet... C'était mieux quand il y avait plus de bulles sa cachait la mauvaise découpe de la main. Je ne comprends pas ta difficulté... Tu prends la plume tu trace le contour de l'objet et ensuite avec la fleche blanche tu fais une sélection et tu enlève ce que tu veux plus... On dirais que la main manque un doigt mais on vois ensuite qu,il est collé.

Bon courage.

Melly
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*Inadesign Oct 22, 2009, 12:43:41 PM
Fascinating piece. Beautifully done!

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=Ferelwing Oct 22, 2009, 1:38:03 PM
Awesome work hon!

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~Skyefan112 Oct 22, 2009, 2:15:20 PM
wonderful work..:hug:

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=ArwenGernak Oct 22, 2009, 10:29:12 PM
tx Skyefan but so many errors to correct.....

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Mood: Joy =ArwenGernak Oct 22, 2009, 11:07:25 PM
not so good Ina, not so good !

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~Skyefan112 Oct 23, 2009, 6:17:35 AM
:hug:

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Psycho babydoll gone wrong
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=ArwenGernak Oct 23, 2009, 10:42:31 AM
and it's a third version ! :) :) my friend :iconMirimelly: help me to progress.
Sorry to offer you always the self concept....but learning is important, no ?

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=ArwenGernak Oct 23, 2009, 10:45:53 AM
correction: :iconmirameli:

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=Ferelwing Oct 23, 2009, 6:51:35 PM
Yeah it's incredibly important! :huggle: I'm loving the sequence though because I can see what's changed and how you blended it!

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***
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Jul 31, 2008, 2:07:44 PM

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